November 16, 2021


a bear settles in

to its cave 

for the winter…

I pay up to park

underground 



Take 5ive issue 4

2 comments:

  1. Fine poem! Thinking about how it would work if the last two lines were, instead, the first two. . .it is much better with those last two lines coming after the first three rather than if they were the first two lines.

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