tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7650556982585689603.post1145313300642420710..comments2024-01-05T16:46:50.003-07:00Comments on Dave Read Poetry: Dave Readhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10331802364483254061noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7650556982585689603.post-38802511446327189492021-11-17T06:41:11.104-07:002021-11-17T06:41:11.104-07:00Agreed. Thanks John.Agreed. Thanks John.Dave Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10331802364483254061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7650556982585689603.post-58147033000140806502021-11-17T06:27:17.893-07:002021-11-17T06:27:17.893-07:00Fine poem! Thinking about how it would work if the...Fine poem! Thinking about how it would work if the last two lines were, instead, the first two. . .it is much better with those last two lines coming after the first three rather than if they were the first two lines.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07941715378584609417noreply@blogger.com