a bear settles in
to its cave
for the winter…
I pay up to park
underground
Take 5ive issue 4
Fine poem! Thinking about how it would work if the last two lines were, instead, the first two. . .it is much better with those last two lines coming after the first three rather than if they were the first two lines.
Agreed. Thanks John.
Fine poem! Thinking about how it would work if the last two lines were, instead, the first two. . .it is much better with those last two lines coming after the first three rather than if they were the first two lines.
ReplyDeleteAgreed. Thanks John.
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