The fragment L1 provided an excellent backdrop to perhaps an inner realization between the persona and his or her partner, providing therefore a crossroad where the relationship could thrive deeper into the blissful.
Love the haiku, and there are more of this quality in the anthology. Here's the website to tell you who Yanty was, and how to buy the book: http://jsalzer.wixsite.com/yantysbutterfly
The fragment L1 provided an excellent backdrop to perhaps an inner realization between the persona and his or her partner, providing therefore a crossroad where the relationship could thrive deeper into the blissful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ao-Suzume. I appreciate the careful reading and thoughtful comments.
Deletei love this haiku/senryu!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Pamela!
Deletethank you appreciate this
ReplyDeleteThank you Martin.
Deletelovely poem! -Debbi
ReplyDeleteThanks Debbi!
DeleteLove the haiku, and there are more of this quality in the anthology. Here's the website to tell you who Yanty was, and how to buy the book: http://jsalzer.wixsite.com/yantysbutterfly
ReplyDeleteIt is a good book for a worthwhile cause. Good stuff, thanks Alan.
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