The fragment L1 provided an excellent backdrop to perhaps an inner realization between the persona and his or her partner, providing therefore a crossroad where the relationship could thrive deeper into the blissful.
Thank you Ao-Suzume. I appreciate the careful reading and thoughtful comments.
i love this haiku/senryu!
Thank you very much Pamela!
thank you appreciate this
Thank you Martin.
lovely poem! -Debbi
Love the haiku, and there are more of this quality in the anthology. Here's the website to tell you who Yanty was, and how to buy the book: http://jsalzer.wixsite.com/yantysbutterfly
It is a good book for a worthwhile cause. Good stuff, thanks Alan.