April 02, 2016

back roads
we drive further
into ourselves


Yanty's Butterfly

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  1. The fragment L1 provided an excellent backdrop to perhaps an inner realization between the persona and his or her partner, providing therefore a crossroad where the relationship could thrive deeper into the blissful.

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    1. Thank you Ao-Suzume. I appreciate the careful reading and thoughtful comments.

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  2. lovely poem! -Debbi

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  3. Love the haiku, and there are more of this quality in the anthology. Here's the website to tell you who Yanty was, and how to buy the book: http://jsalzer.wixsite.com/yantysbutterfly

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    1. It is a good book for a worthwhile cause. Good stuff, thanks Alan.

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